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Boy? Or monster? END

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And as he walked, another figure carved into a column came into view.

He covered his mouth to suppress a surprised gasp. He recognized him! It was Blondie, with his inner demon minified and curled around his neck like a sweet puppy. He had wings like an angel and under the intricate carving there was a plaque. The plaque said: "The angel disguised as a monster".

Behind Tobit's eyelids, tears of joy, happiness, and sadness welled up. And he thought, can you see this Blondie? In the end, you really did become an angel. I'm sure you're with your mother now.'

Tobit placed his back against the column and slid it back down until he was in a sitting position, with his head slightly tilted and his legs splayed out in front of him. He clasped his hands as if he was praying, and thought as he let his heavy eyelids slowly close, I hope I get to see you again soon...

Tobit took his last, quiet breath, let out his last soft sigh, and thought, maybe I'll be able to see Geoffrey too...

And after hundreds of years of immortally roaming his world, the deity known as Tobit, joined his friends at last.
Yes, I have the beginning of this story [here: [link] ] but not the middle! This is the first time I've ever done any thing like this.


Let me explain what happened:

So, the boy that has the pale skin, blue eyes, and bleach blond hair, his name is Blondie. He was taken at a young age from a battle field that actually used to be his hometown before it was destroyed by the big war going on. His who family was killed but his mother held onto life a little longer than the rest, just long enough to say good bye to him. But, he was so young then that he didn't remember his name, so when he showed up as an experimental monster on the front lines where *Tobit and **Geoffrey were "serving time", and Tobit and Geoffrey break him out somehow and were on the run, they couldn't just keep calling him "kid" so they named him "Blondie", because of his hair. In the end [or before it a little], Blondie dies after ending the war, destroying the countries corrupt government, and the "secret society" that turned him into a monster.

*Tobit: Tobit was the first inmate in the first part of "Boy? Or monster?". He's the one that asks, "What is the new boy doing in the cell at the end of the hall?" He and his life-long bud Geoffrey accidentally stumbled one day onto a secret society the government started where magic had been awakened in people and they used it to experiment on humans for war weapons. The secret society couldn't let this get out, so they fabricated a HUGE lie by casting mind control on a bunch of people, and so, Tobit and Geoffrey ended up in a state prison where you are trained for two or three months, and then shoved onto the front lines of the war the country started to "serve time" which usually meant to die by the enemies hands. While on the front lines, people flee from a monster, which turns out to be the boy they had seen [Blondie], they somehow escape with him and blah, blah, blah, blah, blah. Before Blondie dies though, Geoffrey sacrifices himself to save those two, and Tobit blames himself for his death.

Geoffrey: Geoffrey is the guy who answers most of Tobit's questions in the beginning. But, he is mostly a minor character so not much to say there...
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